Renu Rakheja a.k.a Tranquil Ocean


Here Are My Eyes - Poem by Renu Rakheja a.k.a Tranquil Ocean

Here are my eyes
Drown them in yours...

Here are my lips
Eclipse them with yours...

Here is my skin
Dissolve it in yours...

Here is my heart
Unite it with yours...

Here are my dreams
Suffuse them with yours...

Here are my hopes
Fulfill them with yours...

Here are my thoughts
Enervate them with yours...

Here is my soul
Possess it with yours...

Here is my spirit
Elevate it with yours....

Here is my life
Fill it with yours....

Heres Me...
Yours, yours, yours....


Comments about Here Are My Eyes by Renu Rakheja a.k.a Tranquil Ocean

  • (8/26/2008 2:38:00 PM)

    I love this poem and it is very beautiful keep up the work (Report)Reply

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  • rajagopal haran (4/14/2008 4:13:00 AM)

    unique style..vibrant words...well written (Report)Reply

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  • (8/30/2007 10:17:00 AM)

    My Response TO: Here Are My Eyes

    He felt some radiance, as he drowned her deer like eyes in his;
    He sensed her lustrous passion, when obscured her lips by his!
    He caressed the warmth of fleece; as her skin dissolved in his,
    He softened his robust heart, when it was time to reunite with hers!

    That was all a dream – unreal. What a dream, that was! ? !

    He cherished his blemished dreams, as she saturates them in hers;
    He nurtured his failing hopes, to realize them together with hers!

    He sapped the going strength of his thoughts, to encourage hers;
    He awaited her soul to enlighten and affect her power over his!

    He brought his incensed soul to fore; to gratify her mounting soar
    He tormented a damned life and wished for a final hatred from her!
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  • (4/13/2007 5:55:00 AM)

    Wow...ur a master in using the right words...keep it up... (Report)Reply

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  • (2/12/2007 11:15:00 AM)

    That is such an impressive piece of writing. Your words are so graceful. ~Linley~ (Report)Reply

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  • (1/21/2007 5:17:00 PM)

    This is beautiful :)
    P
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  • (12/20/2006 11:07:00 PM)

    Very nice, reminds me of some of my own work, although I thought the ending might be stronger. (Report)Reply

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  • Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr (12/7/2006 3:12:00 AM)

    Most innovative work, T.O..not to mention impassionately seductive, but in a very tasteful style...The Readers love it, PH loves it...me? I love it, and it rightfully belongs at its current elite status...Congrats & kudos on you, my dear!
    Frank
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  • john tiong chunghoo (12/6/2006 6:34:00 AM)

    this is lovely, tranquil. (Report)Reply

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  • Melvina Germain (9/10/2006 11:21:00 AM)

    Here's love--an absolutely beautiful piece-I love it--Melvina (Report)Reply

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  • (9/10/2006 8:45:00 AM)

    Beautiful poem, you captured the heart and soul of love, and I think your readers too! :) (Report)Reply

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  • (9/10/2006 7:55:00 AM)

    And heres us thinking WHAT A GREAT PIECE THIS IS
    Thankyou Darling for sharing your wonderful words
    Love duncan X
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  • (9/10/2006 4:30:00 AM)

    The soulful height of romanticism....loved it :)
    Jack.
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  • (9/8/2006 4:10:00 AM)

    Very passionate. But potentially sublime (Report)Reply

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  • (9/7/2006 8:59:00 AM)

    Hi Tranquil, It is so romantic and meaningful. I really love this poem. I think it holds so much hope for people in love. I hope if I ever fall in love I feel this way too.
    You are a romantic writer. Excellent poem.
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  • (9/6/2006 6:22:00 AM)

    A lyrical, dreamy piece, beautifully composed. Justine (Report)Reply

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  • (9/6/2006 4:50:00 AM)

    'Here are my dreams
    Suffuse them with yours...

    Here are my hopes
    Fulfill them with yours...'


    Treat of life.


    Hope
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  • (9/4/2006 9:50:00 PM)

    This is so lovey-dovey and it flows beautifully.
    Great work!

    Preets
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  • Tailor Bell (9/2/2006 7:42:00 PM)

    tight structure yet unrestricted in delivering a message of deep love. -Tailor (Report)Reply

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  • (9/2/2006 12:09:00 PM)

    Now this speaks with a much higher voice (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, September 2, 2006

Poem Edited: Tuesday, August 31, 2010


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