(h) 6 (Dedications) You Shall Always Live In Us Poem by Renu Rakheja a.k.a Tranquil Ocean

(h) 6 (Dedications) You Shall Always Live In Us

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You slipped away quietly
From the realms of this mortal world
Away from all pains, very rightly
Leaving behind your loved ones and hurled
us into embattling a world without you....

But you still live in us
Vibrant and alive
Through your virtues that we possess
Sheer love and honesty that we strive
Till we are released from this world
To join with you....

When we laugh, it is you laughing in us
When we cry, you envelop us in your hug
When we triumph, is is you who bless
When we falter, it is you who give us a tug
Dear Papaji...you shall always live in us.

David Darbyshire 18 September 2006

very nice read Tran, dave have a nice day xxx

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Preeti - is here! 18 September 2006

This is a lovely tribute, it's sad, but its celebrating life of your Papaji, and thats the way it should be. Preets

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Nalini Hebbar 18 September 2006

TO...i relate to this very much since i lost both my parents 14 years back...there was so much left to do together...love...nalini

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 18 September 2006

T. O.>>>Your flair for impassioned Verse is quite moving, toung lady! This is a text-book example of my claim...A Fine Penning, my dear'''''''''''''''''''''''''FRANK

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Ernestine Northover 19 September 2006

So moving and so masterful. A delight to read, and brought a lump to my throat. A lovely piece of poetry. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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Catastrophe King 18 September 2006

You slipped those tears into my eyes; quietly From the heart and soul of this poetic piece..... All your words. They belong to us. Very rightly...............

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Kelly Allen Vinal 18 September 2006

A rare poem, so powerful I'm speechless...

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Prasanna Kumari 18 September 2006

you bring out the pain of unbearable loss in powerful words

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Ashish R 18 September 2006

Thats a great tribute to your 'Papaji'.He must be beaming with pride up there if he reads this. Ashish.

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