(a) 37 (Love/Passion) I Wish Poem by Renu Rakheja a.k.a Tranquil Ocean
(a) 37 (Love/Passion) I Wish
I wish I was the morning wind
Gently brushing against your skin
I wish I was a ray of sunlight
Giving you warmth that would stay through the night
I wish I was a dropp of wine
That mingled in your blood making it my shrine
I wish I was the fragrance
In the garden of love where you were a prince
I wish I was the spring
In your life with blossoms spreading their wings
I wish I was your breath
Enervating you, keeping you alive
My Response TO: I WISH I am alive, for you are the blowing wind; Caressing my weathered skin your way! I am alive, for you are the ray of sun; That warms my quilt in darkness, too! I am alive, for you are that dropp of wine; This mixed my body and did enshrine! I am alive, for you are the fragrance; That spread an aura of love into my soul! I am alive; for you are the lovely spring; That has blossomed into my lonely life! I am alive; for you are the breath - I breathe I am alive; I am alive; I am alive; I am alive!
There is so much in this, so much that lifts us up, I wish I was the fragrance In the garden of love where you were a prince Such amazing words Love duncan X
GREAT OPENING VERSE...CAPTURES THE READER & IMMEDIATELY ENSCONCES THEM IN WHATS TO FOLLOW...CAN'T CALL IT A TEASE, AS IT ONLY GETS BETTER, BUT THATS STILL WHAT IT'S CALLED & AS A COMPLIMENT IN TRUE! YOU ARE, I SEE IN THE ELITE TOP 500 POETS LIST...CONGRATS...& WELL DESERVED, MY DEAR.'''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''F. j. R.
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4/16/2024 6:58:59 PM # 1.0.0.1119
Good Morning, T.O.! What a lovely dessert to follow my morning TEA! Sweetly sprinkled spiritual and blessed with a touch of the romantic, simply a delightful write! Blessings, Debora