Pain Poem by Tobias Gray

Pain

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The pain it hurts
Why must this be
The way it ends
Can it be

When I saw you
I saw me
You’ve known me
Cant you see

I talked to you
But you ignored me
How can you take that
And still be

You beg me
You plead to me
But now you know
That it cant be

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tyease Collins 14 September 2009

my favorite part was: 'When I saw you I saw me' That was sooooo cute =] Ellie =]

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Ruby Heart 31 January 2009

nice poem! really captures the meaning

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Evaughn Gray 31 January 2009

i really like it.. it's short but it's very good.. your pain seems choppy and a run on.. it's a wonderful piece for a wonderful man, ..~Hazel G.E

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