Pain Of Heart Poem by Surbhi Bawaria (Ahana)

Pain Of Heart

Rating: 5.0


It beats, again it beats
sounds as someone beat
It bawl, but no one hear
Only, came out a tear
Something latent
which is inexpressible
And yea, not adorable
Lonely hearts pain bellow
but a wayward, never gripe
Feelings find way to insertion
now, its time for salvation

Before a itch rouse
for a pleasant row
Let it repose on the bed of rosette
Its tenderness will heal the pain
no loss, no gain
Unaware from the entire mundaneness
and nobody beside with sorrowfulness
So, the count down trigger
it roar twitter
With renounced hope, heartbeat stop

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Olivia Thimes 25 February 2012

your poem is amazing and you are obviously very talented

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Okoye Charles Chukwudi 25 February 2012

nice poem...though a bit complex (for me) I can see the allitrations, good flow of words.. Keep it up..kudos

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Deep Mukherjee 26 February 2012

nice flow of emotions :) keep writing :)

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Megs Poems 26 February 2012

amazing Ahana! ! you really write well..! :)

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Surbhi Bawaria (ahana) 26 February 2012

thanks Okoye and Olivia for comments.... :)

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Ayush Tiwari 08 June 2012

SIMPLY awesome.....! ! ! Highly innovative.....10on 10...B-)

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Surbhi Bawaria (ahana) 12 March 2012

thanks a lot Sagar......... :))

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Sagar Shelar 11 March 2012

Really nice poem. You express your feelings very well. Little bit complicated it looks. Your writing style is so nice. keep it up....

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Surbhi Bawaria (ahana) 27 February 2012

Hey! ....thanks a ton Romeo....your comments really appreciated me a lot...n literally I need such a support.... :)

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Surbhi Bawaria (ahana) 27 February 2012

thanks Deep and Megs.... :))))) thanks alot for reading

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