It beats, again it beats
sounds as someone beat
It bawl, but no one hear
Only, came out a tear
Something latent
which is inexpressible
And yea, not adorable
Lonely hearts pain bellow
but a wayward, never gripe
Feelings find way to insertion
now, its time for salvation
Before a itch rouse
for a pleasant row
Let it repose on the bed of rosette
Its tenderness will heal the pain
no loss, no gain
Unaware from the entire mundaneness
and nobody beside with sorrowfulness
So, the count down trigger
it roar twitter
With renounced hope, heartbeat stop
nice poem...though a bit complex (for me) I can see the allitrations, good flow of words.. Keep it up..kudos
Really nice poem. You express your feelings very well. Little bit complicated it looks. Your writing style is so nice. keep it up....
Hey! ....thanks a ton Romeo....your comments really appreciated me a lot...n literally I need such a support.... :)
thanks Deep and Megs.... :))))) thanks alot for reading
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
your poem is amazing and you are obviously very talented