Voice Of Soul Poem by Surbhi Bawaria (Ahana)
Voice Of Soul
Hey! I'm your soul
don't let me down
You aren't a coward, not a coy
but a shining star of sky
No one can dare to withhold your crown
I'm your soul, don't let me down
I'd chosen garish garland for you
why? ? ? then asking for deadly flue
stop! ..acting like wanted to be drawn
I'm your soul, don't let me down
Not to scare, envy from world
yet, you are a growing bud
the one who'll enrich your brawn
I'm your soul, don't let me down
Yeah...it is filled with metaphors...but its good...i like the last verse most....kudos..keep writting. You might like my poem...A picture and surreal....do leave a comment/criticism...thanks for sharing
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A sublime start with a nice poem, Surbhi Bawaria (ahana) . You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.
thanks Sanu....plz do read my poem Pain Of Heart..... :)
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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5/7/2024 10:39:37 AM # 1.0.0.1119
the poem is full of metaphysical ideas and treatment of the subject.