Surbhi Bawaria (Ahana)

Rookie (03-12-1991 / Nagpur)

Voice Of Soul - Poem by Surbhi Bawaria (Ahana)

Hey! I'm your soul
don't let me down

You aren't a coward, not a coy
but a shining star of sky
No one can dare to withhold your crown
I'm your soul, don't let me down

I'd chosen garish garland for you
why? ? ? then asking for deadly flue
stop! ..acting like wanted to be drawn
I'm your soul, don't let me down

Not to scare, envy from world
yet, you are a growing bud
the one who'll enrich your brawn
I'm your soul, don't let me down


Comments about Voice Of Soul by Surbhi Bawaria (Ahana)

  • Jazib KamalviJazib Kamalvi (12/6/2017 12:23:00 AM)

    A sublime start with a nice poem, Surbhi Bawaria (ahana) . You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you. (Report)Reply

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  • Ayush Tiwari (6/8/2012 2:29:00 PM)

    creative.... xcelent flow! ! ! (Report)Reply

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  • Surbhi Bawaria (ahana)Surbhi Bawaria (ahana) (3/1/2012 1:24:00 PM)

    thanks Sanu....plz do read my poem Pain Of Heart..... :) (Report)Reply

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  • Dead Leaf (2/28/2012 8:50:00 AM)

    Hey! I'm your soul
    don't let me down

    good job....
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  • Surbhi Bawaria (ahana)Surbhi Bawaria (ahana) (2/26/2012 2:08:00 PM)

    thanks Dave for your appreciation... :) (Report)Reply

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  • Dave Walker (2/26/2012 1:33:00 PM)

    A beautiful poem with a beautiful flow.
    A great write.
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  • Surbhi Bawaria (ahana)Surbhi Bawaria (ahana) (2/26/2012 2:44:00 AM)

    Thanks Okoye and Niamat Ali Murtazai for your views.... (Report)Reply

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  • Okoye Charles ChukwudiOkoye Charles Chukwudi (2/24/2012 12:04:00 PM)

    Yeah...it is filled with metaphors...but its good...i like the last verse most....kudos..keep writting.

    You might like my poem...A picture and surreal....do leave a comment/criticism...thanks for sharing
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  • Niamat Ali Murtazai (2/24/2012 11:42:00 AM)

    the poem is full of metaphysical ideas and treatment of the subject. (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, February 24, 2012

Poem Edited: Friday, February 24, 2012


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