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Pain, Scars, Love

Rating: 5.0
pain heals with time
scars come with pain
love can heal a scar
still it takes time to attain

some scars cant heal
but we can learn to cope
and if you have love
there is always hope

you can try and bury a scar
but it's like putting make up over wrinkles
hiding it can only go so far
the scar prickles and tingles

hiding gets you nowhere
in pain and in love
dont hide, even if your scared
just remember the info above
Pamela Sinicrope 04 November 2015
Nice poem. This reads like a great country music lyric to me. The third stanza really pulls the piece together. I hope you put this to music!
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Sandy Player 24 December 2012
Simple logical path through this field of thought. If only reality was as easy.
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Pari Dharawat 23 November 2011
Beautiful poem with all the emotions blended perfectly. Nice one. Keep writing
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in this poem you speak of truth, most people do hide they are real shy, you shouldnt be afraid tgo speak the truth and show the real you.4 hiding can only go so far but is it really hiding? i really enjoyed this poem. you may not realize that what you speak of really does inspire people, great job and great work this poem has great a great rythmic flow and rhyme. i give this a ten. :)
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Makayla Straight 13 May 2011
The truth is well written. I love this poem. Thank you so much for sharing
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I like the truth in these well chosen words. Thanks for sharing this.
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Romeo Della Valle 03 May 2011
Positive thinking is the key to success and happiness and you seem to have it. This is a well penned, poignant and uplifting write! 10+++ Keep it up! You got what it takes to make it through the Poetry's World, talent! Love and Peace for always! ....
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Raven Mcgovern 03 May 2011
Nicely written you should be proud of your work it inspired me, thanks for sharing.
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Great poem with a lot of wisdom. Wonderfully written. Great imagery. Fine poetics. A big...10 Thanks for sharing..... Please read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2
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