Painful(Less) Love! ! Poem by HaZeM PaKKaR

Painful(Less) Love! !



The whole book,
any book,
every book,
has just one single line.
As this line is very very long,
we create pages to make it easier to read.

The lonely heart,
any heart,
every heart,
has just one single pain.
As this pain is very very deep,
we create LOVE to make it less painful to live.
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23Jan2010 -
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM

I love the structure if your poem! Especially the first three lines of each because I loved how it emphasizes the book and the heart. And I think you're right. Have you heard that there are only seven original plots in the world? It really just means that there are only multiple versions of the same stories, just different character names. But I think that it every one of those plots and in every version of those plots the people in it have that pain (that I took sort of as feeling they belong) and they do create love to overpower it. I also think that you’re hinting at life not being worth living without love. With which I also agree. I love your poem! I thi9nk your words are very powerful.

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Merna Ibrahim 23 January 2010

A good write and a good perspective as well! ! Good Job..keep it up friend :)

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Rania Hammoud 23 January 2010

PHilosopihical till some extent, , , I believe in this. I liked the first part...

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Adam Reed 23 January 2010

wow that was beautiful. it takes great perspective to see things the way you do. your a great writer. =) comment on mine sumtime plz

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