Monday, November 16, 2009

Paint Our Blood Comments

Rating: 5.0

They're so very funny, what they think they're doing for me,
Just protection, degradation, but disrupting the peace.
And I wish that they knew, it's not discouragement, it's fuel,
For the flame of adolescence, sweetly it burns, so cruel.
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Kelly Aragon 01 February 2010

I love how the poetry flowed. Plus the fact it was really cool. :)

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Serenity Prayer 23 December 2009

very interesting poem, but interesting in a good way. good job writing your thoughts out.

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Eyan Desir 26 November 2009

Emotions well placed on paper

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Danny H 16 November 2009

I love the expression paint our blood its vividly imaginative. Wonderful poem. Keep it up :)

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