Free Faller

Rookie (May 23,1993 / Washington State)

Blocked - Poem by Free Faller

Where the rain stops falling
Where the bugs stop crawling
Where the rivers stop flowing
Where the rumors stop growing
Where the voices stop speaking
Where the blood stops bleeding
Where the people stop thinking
Where the city lights stop blinking
Where the violence has stopped
I’m sorry, this area is blocked

Comments about Blocked by Free Faller

  • (9/26/2008 4:22:00 PM)

    This poem is kinda funny, and captures your attention. I really love it. (Report) Reply

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  • (4/4/2006 6:04:00 PM)

    Very thought provoking. I found it not to be confusing at all. I feel that in your poem you were saying there's is a pace were all bad things stop, but because of the state the world is in that place is blocked. Bravo, this will be one of my favorites. (Report) Reply

  • (4/2/2006 9:20:00 AM)

    I find this poem slightly confusing free faller, maybe it was the other comment that did it, but what you describe in your poem does not sound like a heavenly place to me. Interesting thought provoker poem though. 9 from Tai (Report) Reply

  • (4/2/2006 9:15:00 AM)

    Good. Sort of like a little piece of heaven. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, April 2, 2006

Poem Edited: Monday, January 26, 2009

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