Paradise Poem by Joey Christian

Paradise

Rating: 5.0


Perfect imaginary
Auras; romantic and fantastic
Reflections of light,
Astral delights,
Dreamy peace abounds with an
Idyllic rich crimson
Sunset swirling through to
Eternal and everlasting love.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 18 January 2007

SO WHAT ARE WE DOING NOW....CRITIQUEING OUR OWN WORK? lol! Your opening line sums it all up...'Perfect Imagery'....solid work, Joey... ~ F. j. R. ~ P.S.> YOU STAND CLEAR OF THE D E L E T E OPTION NOW, YOU HEAR? !

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Patricia Gale 18 January 2007

Such splendid imagery, well done!

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