jen capaldi

art oOe

Crying alone
the rain pours
confused
I lay
Not knowing where
Where you could be
stolen
out of my arms
taken
away
Never to be seen
Your voice
echoes
through
my
mind
Your memory
fades away
I am lost
I need you here
For protection
selfish
how selfish
I am
I love you
Always I will
please
come
back
Please ignore them
Ignore their warnings
pass
them
by.....
Enter my world
again
join
me
I never wanted pain
happieness
has
disapeared......



Help me find it
once again
please
overlook
them
Place your gaze upon me
my tears won't stop
my eyes
fixated
upon you
The one I love
Please don't stop my tears
simply
brush
them
away......

Poem Submitted: Saturday, August 22, 2009
Poem Edited: Thursday, September 3, 2009

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Comments about art oOe by jen capaldi

  • Mehta Hasmukh AmathalalMehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/10/2009 7:35:00 PM)

    upon you
    The one I love
    Please don't stop my tears
    simply
    brush
    them
    away...... there is bliss inignorance and der donot allow tears to roll out from eyes else it may bring shame and dishonour on you..let you true love come andbrush itaway..well done in poetry and i would wish many more creationfs fromyou...congrats.....10

    read mine cry not......a place callled home....welcome...you go back...yes yes yes

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  • Spiritwind WoodSpiritwind Wood (9/30/2009 8:42:00 PM)

    i would've rated this, but the rate box was gone-10 for me-what a heartbreaker

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  • Mubeen SadhikaMubeen Sadhika (9/16/2009 11:57:00 PM)

    Form is very good. Heart felt expressions. Beautifully worded. Deserves 10+++++++

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  • Keith Hendrickson (9/7/2009 8:43:00 PM)

    another great piece of writing. like the form of this 1 and the style. your words flow very smoothly.

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  • Dr.subhendu KarDr.subhendu Kar (9/7/2009 3:53:00 AM)

    Please don't stop my tears
    simply
    brush
    them
    away...................love intense by alienation
    cry of innocence bewilders at criss-cross, utterly passionate and poignant too, wrought ingeniously by gloomy shadow of alienation, soul crunches deep whispering to the rune of hope of tomorrow, quite heart touching, yet heart awaits meandering.....10+++, thanks for sharing

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  • Floyd Zimmerman (9/5/2009 2:50:00 PM)

    The last line is great, you seem so fragile

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  • Maria C (9/1/2009 3:23:00 PM)

    That was very moving :) . I enjoyed it

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  • Omar Ibrahim (8/24/2009 3:03:00 AM)

    i liked the last expression......the poem is wonderful i give it 10

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  • Winnie Angel (8/23/2009 8:33:00 PM)

    Wow! such passionate caaling to come back leaving else..just can be felt the desire and the long wait ya in..Winnie

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