Jahan zaib

Rookie - 130 Points (February 05,1981 / Malakand Pakistan)

Past - Poem by Jahan zaib

Flew with it and it took me alone,
to an unknown place of peace and beauty,
Where everyone shared every happiness of others,
And stood by them in moments of grief,
Where no one begged and no one cried,
Where kids were happy and parents in delight,
Where no one knew the art of cheating,
The men were honest thee women loyal,
The ruler was love the ruled were people,
I wanted to stay and live in that kingdom,
But, It said, 'Let's go back it's not you belong to',
My dream brought me backkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk

Comments about Past by Jahan zaib

  • (10/5/2012 3:16:00 AM)

    A fantastic poem, maybe one day the world will be like this. (Report) Reply

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  • S.zaynab Kamoonpuri (9/18/2012 11:47:00 PM)

    Ah yes d good old days when d world was more moral, no wonder few wil make it to paradise frm these times. Nice to read yor fabulous poem. Kudos 4 it. (Report) Reply

  • (8/20/2012 12:34:00 PM)

    so incredible write i must say sir
    past is something that is gone but still it logged with us someway and somewhere in our mind, we born we sow a seed and then as the time passes by the seed grows into a huge tree with some sweet and with some bitter fruits and we can test them anytime we want.....
    a brilliant poem from a brilliant poet
    thank you for sharing this wonderful piece
    best wishes
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Poem Submitted: Monday, August 20, 2012

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