Patches Of Emptiness Poem by Zyw Zywa

Patches Of Emptiness

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Pull out the first, the second
and a few more
each day

Maybe you think
it's better to dye
and you try

some fancy colours and
you often look in the mirror
That's it

Until you get patches of emptiness
where a grey hair does not stand out
In the end you pull out the last one

Monday, October 18, 2021
Topic(s) of this poem: old age
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Inspired by 'When his hair started to grey' (2019, Fazlul Huq) --- Collection 'Different times'
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rose Marie Juan-austin 18 October 2021

A well expressed and wonderful poem. Great thoughts to ponder about.

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