[ A Full Moon And I ] Poem by Zyw Zywa

[ A Full Moon And I ]

Rating: 5.0


A full moon and I

lie and listen all night long -


to the silent dark.

Sunday, April 28, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: moon
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This was my very first 5-7-5 poem, written on Friday September 25th,1992

Collection "Moons"
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mahtab Bangalee 28 April 2019

it's beautiful expression // none is; just moon and I are the combined nation of the charming dark!

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Zywa Zywa 28 April 2019

It's an impressive experience everyone should have

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Jane Campion 22 July 2019

Loved this poem.To my poem list pronto!

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Zywa Zywa 22 July 2019

It is nice that you re-read it. Poems are precious, and they keep rendering value to the reader, each time they are read.

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Lidia Hristeva 13 October 2022

Tanka is difficult to master, but you succeeded, lovely poem

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S. Wesley Mcgranor 14 February 2021

Amen to that.

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Dr Antony Theodore 06 October 2020

listening the whole night to the melodies of the full moon. very fine poem. tony

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Chinedu Dike 30 January 2020

A concise and beautiful composition. A beautiful haiku. Thanks for sharing, Zywa Zywa.

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Sankaran Ayya 23 October 2019

brief but beautiful lines Zywa Zywa

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Zywa Zywa 23 October 2019

Thank you Ayya for letting me know: -)

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