Path Is Open Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Path Is Open

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Path is open
Tuesday, July 21,2020
7: 24 AM

God is so kind to us
Keep good faith and trust
Everything will be alright
Breathe with peace and feel right

Everything is open
Dream and have the glimpse of heaven
You shall be happily driven
With the feelings of the divine scene

No one can prevent you
From going through the path
That you have chosen to be useful
For the life and making it as purposeful

No one may love to be dumped in the hell
So feel with good work done and tell
In your friend's circle
Not to struggle for illusory subjects

If you are not to carry any world treasure
What kind of pleasure it can give?
It is total deception and has blinded our eyes
Despite the hard try, we can't even see

Hasmukh Mehta

Path Is Open
Tuesday, July 21, 2020
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Path is open Tuesday, July 21,2020 7: 24 AM If you are not to carry any world treasure What kind of pleasure it can give? It is total deception and has blinded our eyes Despite the hard try, we can't even see Hasmukh Mehta

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Kumarmani Mahakul 21 July 2020

No one likes to go to and enjoy punishment. Every person likes to go to heaven in righteous road. Such person has to carry values of love, righteousness and to breath in right mood of life. Such person should have trust on God. We should remember our eternal father at each moment in this life's journey. We have to keep the purposeful dream of heaven in mind and moral living. An excellent poem is well penned...10

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Date & Time: 7/21/2020 5: 56: 00 AM Remove this comment Poem: 58811117 - Path Is Open Member: Mahtab Bangalee Comment: the world is big field is open mind like the flying endless everywhere...........poetic pen can can go wherever it wants

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Date & Time: 7/21/2020 4: 42: 00 AM Remove this comment Poem: 58811117 - Path Is Open Member: Kumarmani Mahakul Such person should have trust on God. We should remember our eternal father at each moment in this life's journey. We have to keep the purposeful dream of heaven in mind and moral living. An excellent poem is well penned...10

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Date & Time: 7/21/2020 4: 42: 00 AM Remove this comment Poem: 58811117 - Path Is Open Member: Kumarmani Mahakul Comment: No one likes to go to and enjoy punishment. Every person likes to go to heaven in righteous road. Such person has to carry values of love, righteousness and to breath in right mood of life.

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Mahtab Bangalee 21 July 2020

the world is big field is open mind like the flying endless everywhere...........poetic pen can can go wherever it wants

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Poem: 58811117 - Path Is Open Member: Robert M Smith Comment: A beautifully constructed write. It would fill the heart of the faithful with pride. Best poem, no doubt there.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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