Paved With Good Intentions And All That Poem by Seamus O' Brian

Paved With Good Intentions And All That



You do that to me.
It's this frickin' 'lover's quarrel'
(Your phrase I'm stealing—
Not mine- though technically you
Haven't used it yet)
I mistakenly believe—
Why am I surprised,
You and I have this recurring
Sequence, like moisture licking
Stalactites one century at a time,
And I mistakenly believe
I have created you
But you turn on me.

There was a thought- no-
A beautifully romantic image
I was sure to express
And a single word—I
Put that word down—
It was supposed to be
My word—but you—you
Take hold of my mind with
My own word, and send me
To dripping caverns,
Fog-frosted bowlines,
Soil-moistened, arrow-frog
Kaleidoscopes of memories
I never had but wish were mine
All wrapped up, tied snugly
Into that single word
Which was supposed to
Say something
entirely different.

And now I'm standing in
A perfectly good sonnet
With wet shoes.
I know I said frickin'.
‘Cause I'm feeling frickin'.
Perfectly good sonnet.
Hell, call it free verse.
I'm done.

Thursday, October 13, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: writing,poetry
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Seamus O' Brian

Seamus O' Brian

Galway, Ireland
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