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I read
A sacred book
Searching ways
For peace of mind

It struck
The right chord
For it said
Your mind
Is your chiefest enemy

So I broke
My mind
Into several pieces

Raveendran N.V.

Friday, July 13, 2007

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Emancipation Planz 03 October 2007

I love this piece! ! !

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Alison Cassidy 21 September 2007

This is superb Raveendran. You have captured truth in this tightly scripted little spiritual gem. Love it. Allie xxxxxxxxxxxx

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Marci Made 15 July 2007

Yes Peace has to start first from within, for if we can't love ourselves than in turn we can't love others....A good lesson here, if only we could start inside our own hearts perhaps than it could filter out and gradually lead to a world full of peace...Not likely in my lifetime, but, still I hope, , , , , , , , , , , , , very good write imo. marci. :)

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Melvina Germain 13 July 2007

A rather intriguing piece, thought provoking with the play on words as well, enjoyed.--Melvina--

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