I read
A sacred book
Searching ways
For peace of mind
It struck
The right chord
For it said
Your mind
Is your chiefest enemy
So I broke
My mind
Into several pieces
This is superb Raveendran. You have captured truth in this tightly scripted little spiritual gem. Love it. Allie xxxxxxxxxxxx
Yes Peace has to start first from within, for if we can't love ourselves than in turn we can't love others....A good lesson here, if only we could start inside our own hearts perhaps than it could filter out and gradually lead to a world full of peace...Not likely in my lifetime, but, still I hope, , , , , , , , , , , , , very good write imo. marci. :)
A rather intriguing piece, thought provoking with the play on words as well, enjoyed.--Melvina--
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
I love this piece! ! !