Peace Poem by Mark Fahmy

Peace

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Have you ever imagined our world without war?
Where there is no killing anymore
Where peace is everywhere
And the world becomes truly fair

Where hearts are filled with love
And there's no one trying to be tough
Why don't we have a rebirth?
And name our new country Earth

Why do we always insist on killing each other?
Rather than trying to love one another
Why don't we remove the dust?
And try to live in a world full of trust

We're used to hearing bad news on the television
Why don't we try to help and refuse division?
Or we'll stay as blind people with no vision
We must make a really fast decision

I really don't understand what we are fighting for
So let's try to stop war
Let's make it a history, as something we did before
So we won't hear about it in the news anymore

So let's put back the gun
And put our hands together as one
And stop war because we've got a goal to chase
The goal is to make this Earth a better place

The key to success is peace
It's the shiniest one of all keys
So now we have a goal to achieve
Do we believe in peace? Yes, we do believe

Sunday, June 5, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: conflict,earth,hope,peace,peaceful,poem,poems,war,war and peace,world
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This is a poem I wrote when I was really young (in middle school) , and I remember I felt every word of it as I said it in front of a large audience at school. Good times! :)
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Istabraq Al Ahmadi 02 July 2016

The message of your poem is loud & clear! War is the root of all evil in the world and it gives evidence to man's failure to live up to his promise of making the world a better place to live in. Thanks a lot. Wish you good luck. You can read my poems and comment on them.

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Mark Fahmy 03 July 2016

Thanks a lot Istabraq! Your comment is really true.. wish you all the best of luck too! Peace out! :)

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I too believe in peace. Such a powerful perspective!

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Mark Fahmy 11 June 2016

Thanks a lot, Howard!

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Dr Antony Theodore 08 June 2016

you are 100 percent right...... let us stop war, let us love...... we have so much to achieve. that we can do only when we l ive in peace. we shall offer our lives to the poor and needy in this world and create a wondrful world of love. thank you for this great poem on love and peace... may God bless you to spread such messages always through the poems....... God bless yu. tony

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Mark Fahmy 11 June 2016

Yes, hopefully to a world full of love! Thank you so much for taking the time to write me this much appreciated comment. God bless you too, Dr. Tony

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