Tuesday, January 5, 2016

Peaceful >>> Comments

Rating: 5.0

oh! I see how cruel
your mouth could be
could it be to food
could be to my ear
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Manonton Dalan
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Nosheen Irfan 07 January 2016

It's good to distance oneself from negativity. I sleep on it..that's beautiful expression.

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Anil Kumar Panda 06 January 2016

Simple and to the point. Loved the emotion in it.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 05 January 2016

Sentiments expressed in down to earth manner but in poetic and enjoyable style. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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Manonton Dalan

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