Peering From Petite Blouse Poem by Aniruddha Pathak

Peering From Petite Blouse

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Outgoes seem with incomes to nurse grouse,
One has handsome outlook,
The ‘ther no breach can brook,
Breasts as feel frustrate, confined in-house,
And peer out from a shrunk woollen blouse.
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Words well said | 48.11.14 |

Saturday, August 3, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: house
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 07 December 2019

Enjoyed the fun sir! You limericks resembles limericks of esteemed poetess Valsa Gerge! I like both of your works

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Aniruddha Pathak 07 December 2019

And one more point, dear poet/reader, How you dug out this 2014 poem, it amazes me, 'for, its diction is rather complicated, and yet you saw the humour, which shows you have an eye for humour.

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Aniruddha Pathak 07 December 2019

Corrections... Please read, Comparisons, as they say, are odious,

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Aniruddha Pathak 07 December 2019

Your comments are noted, thanks divine, But let's leave comparison to poetic line. Comparisons, as they, are odious, They lack some focus, if not locus. You enjoyed the fun, A poet's job is done. Thanks so much dear Dr Swain, you're welcome anyway.

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Godhra - Gujarat
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