Pensive Thot... Poem by Mikel Calcagno

Pensive Thot...

Rating: 5.0


it's been like this forever
trudging thru imperfections like a feather sifting thru the wind
I don't know if I wanna take this anymore
If there's a point then you have to prove to me that you're worth the everything I must save

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Littlewolf Brooks 03 February 2007

You should never give up. And it should never be close to the point but saved by another. Imperfections make us half of whom we are. And your not a bad person what so ever. It was short and good. much luv -LW

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Erin Resha 01 September 2006

you spelled thought wrong. =]

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Amelie Anonymous 30 August 2006

Well said, I loved that....

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