Hasmukhlal Amathalallal

Gold Star - 612,694 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Permanent - Poem by Hasmukhlal Amathalallal

It is imagined
About some lines
That men always wear false smile
And go for hunt meanwhile

Only mother’s and sister’s relation
Can be with no equation
But to find one permanent
Presence of mind and needs thrust constant

It is some what a need
We all must heed
Life and age go together
So we need some one as partner

Love and lust two sides of the coin
One goes after it with lots of fun
Finds in fix with unbearable pain
Yet it is preferred with no gain

Let us care
For sentiments
Its movement
And for leisurely moments


Comments about Permanent by Hasmukhlal Amathalallal

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/21/2013 12:18:00 AM)


    Mehta Sir, this is a splendid poem and the last para' is captivating!


    Chandra Thiagarajan, Chennai
    Jun 21,2013
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/20/2013 8:43:00 PM)


    Sharu; - - * Love and lust two sides of the coin Let us care For sentiments...............FINE ONE SIR

    My Faith That men always wear false smile And go for hunt meanwhile
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/20/2013 8:43:00 PM)


    williams Prince nice
    P() () j@, very nice sir, , , , ,
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/20/2013 8:42:00 PM)


    noel elnol wow nice

    upendra Singh nice

    DEVKISHAN MEH.. NICE..

    surekha[ NO M.. v nice sir
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/20/2013 8:42:00 PM)


    Eugene Pacifico3 minutes ago Where the author expresses confusion about men and behavioral tendencies that are always not very welcome, but in its movement for sentiments in leisurely moments together is to let us care. (Report) Reply

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/20/2013 8:41:00 PM)


    Emotions and relationships vargus pike3 minutes ago I liked the way the poem opened but then the rhymes became forced and heavy. I thought the rhythm was solid and the message was clear. Comment +1 Sentiments of relationshiips (Report) Reply

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/20/2013 8:41:00 PM)


    Juwita Heart, Maria Jaqueline Singlan Sosa and Josef Schwabl like this. Maria Jaqueline Singlan Sosa wow! 2 minutes ago · Unlike · 1 (Report) Reply

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/20/2013 8:41:00 PM)


    S.ramesh ra Thank U Sir! Aapko andaaza nahi hoga ke Aapke poems ke bina Shtyle kithna bore he!

    Elzbieta Kry.. very... nice.
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/18/2013 9:15:00 PM)


    Ayesha Nigam and Author Kesha Finesse Murphy like this (Report) Reply

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/18/2013 8:50:00 PM)


    Permanent

    It is imagined
    About some lines
    That men always wear false smile
    And go for hunt meanwhile
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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, June 18, 2013

Poem Edited: Wednesday, June 19, 2013


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