Permanent Relation Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Permanent Relation

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I was in blossom
The change was noticed seldom
I was in my young age
Red cheeks you can image

Honeybees all round
For my petals to open but not found
Made "hum" noise purposefully
I was mesmerized fully

One of bees came and sat over
Tried to smell to and open cover
I felt shy and made head down
It was last good time I owned

They were in quite numbers
Came on one by one to remember
Fragrance and sweet smell
I had no chance to warn others and tell

I was aware but lost in succession
All my beauty was touched sans confusion
It was all over for womanhood
The talk of town was in neighborhood

I had full satisfaction
That was real indication
Some sort of secret elation
Brand new bond and permanent relation

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I like how the subject matter is delivered subtly and it takes reflection to understand 9 minutes ago by Erika Williams | Reply

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ummm jasmine bounds18 minutes ago O

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Gajanan Mishra 08 June 2014

very fine But nothing is permanent Not even time and still we are Here in search of permanency.

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I was in blossom The change was noticed seldom

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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