Monday, January 5, 2009

Petal Falls Comments

Rating: 5.0

Silent teardrops, roses weep
For the bloom, it could not keep
And as the final petal falls
All that's left, a body of thorns
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Tia Maria
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Fiona Davidson 31 March 2009

Such a beautiful heart breaking piece Tia...thank you....10++

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Fay Slimm 13 January 2009

Sad and wistful Tia - - - and loved your oopening line....... thanks and always remember it will bloom again.......hugs Fay...xx

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Tom Balch 05 January 2009

Lovely piece Tia,10 regards Tom

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Sumita Datta 05 January 2009

Very sweet and rthymic.. good write

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Lynda Robson 05 January 2009

Lovely Tia, the rose being the symbol of love, love will return, 10 Lynda xx

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C T Heart 05 January 2009

mystic yet beautiful and meaningful...10+++

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Kris Smith 05 January 2009

Nice one Tia they always come back (the title of my latest poem) 10 +++ Chris

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