Mohammed Asim Nehal

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Philosophical ~ Life's Journey Quartain - Poem by Mohammed Asim Nehal

We keep peddling the empty promise
For the life of prosperity
to soothe the wounds of the heart
Heart respites no mercy until the bitter end.

We innocently try to fill our heart with love
Eye accumulates tears furthermore
To relieve this pain of suffering
We indulge in mindless meditation

Life seems totally disoriented
With no understanding just thoughts
It is kind of waking up from deep sleep
Where the life passes through a distant dream.

Form: Quatrain


Comments about Philosophical ~ Life's Journey Quartain by Mohammed Asim Nehal

  • Rose Marie Juan-austin (1/26/2019 12:19:00 PM)

    A wonderful and insightful write on life.
    The opening lines and the rest of the write are
    deep analysis of life itself.
    So very true words that touch one's heart and mind.
    Brilliantly penned.
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  • (1/25/2019 10:04:00 PM)

    Philosophy of life nicely penned. Meditation is by choice not by force or compulsion. (Report)Reply

    (1/26/2019 1:45:00 AM)

    Thank u so much Depak ss

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  • Drtony Brahmin (1/25/2019 2:03:00 PM)

    Life seems totally disoriented
    With no understanding just thoughts.moral.. ethics, justice....... we are really disoriented as you present your poem dear poet. thank u for this eye-opener. tony
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    (1/26/2019 1:45:00 AM)

    Thank u so much My friend Dr Tony B.

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  • (1/25/2019 11:58:00 AM)

    Four fantastic lines picked from your own poem.
    Life seems totally disoriented
    With no understanding just thoughts
    It is kind of waking up from deep sleep
    Where the life passes through a distant dream.
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    (1/26/2019 1:44:00 AM)

    Thank u so much..

    (1/26/2019 1:43:00 AM)

    Thank u so much Z O

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  • Poet Poet (1/25/2019 7:47:00 AM)

    HAD U SEEN MY GARDEN POEM
    AND UR NAME MENTIONED
    LIFE'S IMAGE WOULD HAVE BEEN
    TOTALLY DIFFERENT
    NOW M A N
    KINDLY C
    HAPPY U WILL BE
    POETRY IS LIFE FOR THEE
    AS IT IS FOR ME- - - - - - - - -_____==================
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    (1/26/2019 1:44:00 AM)

    Thank u so much, The poet poet, But you forgot to write about my above poem whether you liked it or not? ?

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  • Dr Dillip K Swain (1/25/2019 6:43:00 AM)

    Life seems totally disoriented/With no understanding just thoughts......touching expression! Excellent work....10 (Report)Reply

    (1/26/2019 1:42:00 AM)

    Thank u so much Dr Dillip.

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Poem Submitted: Friday, January 25, 2019

Poem Edited: Friday, January 25, 2019


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