We keep peddling the empty promise
For the life of prosperity
to soothe the wounds of the heart
Heart respites no mercy until the bitter end.
We innocently try to fill our heart with love
Eye accumulates tears furthermore
To relieve this pain of suffering
We indulge in mindless meditation
Life seems totally disoriented
With no understanding just thoughts
It is kind of waking up from deep sleep
Where the life passes through a distant dream.
You sir are sincerely visually a deep sensed poet unlike me I am only off the cuff mostly
A wonderful and insightful write on life. The opening lines and the rest of the write are deep analysis of life itself. So very true words that touch one's heart and mind. Brilliantly penned.
Philosophy of life nicely penned. Meditation is by choice not by force or compulsion.
Thank u so much Depak ss
Life seems totally disoriented With no understanding just thoughts.moral.. ethics, justice....... we are really disoriented as you present your poem dear poet. thank u for this eye-opener. tony
Thank u so much My friend Dr Tony B.
HAD U SEEN MY GARDEN POEM AND UR NAME MENTIONED LIFE'S IMAGE WOULD HAVE BEEN TOTALLY DIFFERENT NOW M A N KINDLY C HAPPY U WILL BE POETRY IS LIFE FOR THEE AS IT IS FOR ME- - - - - - - - -_____==================
Thank u so much, The poet poet, But you forgot to write about my above poem whether you liked it or not? ?
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.I would like to translate this poem
Life seems totally disoriented/With no understanding just thoughts......touching expression! Excellent work....10
Thank u so much Dr Dillip.