Picking Her Up Poem by Lily YANG

Picking Her Up



The north wind hard blows.
Cats and dogs rain beat heavily.
The mud splashes my trousers.
Even difficult, pick her up timely.

Picking Her Up
Wednesday, December 23, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: childhood ,love
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
love poetry
childhood poetry
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 01 January 2016

Walking through the Rain. Nice work.

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Anil Kumar Panda 25 December 2015

Cute write. Rhyme and flow is sweet! !

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Manonton Dalan 24 December 2015

very beautiful... sounds like my mom picking me up from school

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