Wednesday, September 6, 2006

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When everybody against with you and no smile at all,
Not a single word you hear and only the frustration you fear.
This unending road you are stepping my aimless traveler,
Perhaps you may see a little street child cries.
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nimal dunuhinga
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Joseph Daly 07 September 2006

This is beautiful. For me it has some resonance having returned from a battle of sorts. I found solace and a weariness was lifted. This is a piece that works as a parable. It is not a common way of writing these days and yet it is one that you skillfully employ. I am finding that your works can be split into groups. Each one having its own function. Fantastic work my friend, one that I have found rather moving.

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Sandra Fowler 06 September 2006

Straight from the soul without hesitation. Very appealing. Paints a memorable word picture. Encore, Nimal! Warm regards, Sandra

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