Dash maas dash din garbhen dhari aailaa se din aaij
Aril tarli hauchhe bhuaasen chhaadi jaaichhe laaij.
Haaimaa haaibuaa kirlauchhe kankani dukh dekhi
Chhidi jaauchhe taar god haanth baahaaruchhe ras aankhi.
Jaanu bhitren baahaar baa chhuaa chhot te kathaa aai kaain.
Maaus haad sabu ghichi hauchhe kanhaa badhaabaar ke.
Duishachha haad bhaanglaa lekhen darad hauchhe thensi
Gad-gadi gad-dgadi kaanduchhe bhuaasen tanti jaauchhe sukhi
Daakuchhe bhagbaan maa hebaar taa ete dukh, neijaa tor pakhke.
Laaij saram chhaadi naglaa butlaa se kirlauchhe kete
Aankhir laha buhi naed helaana pherbi darad jete tete.
Kauchhe daktar kati nia pet baahaar karidiaa chhuaa
Sahi naain paaruchhen darad aau muin kentaa hemi maa.
Etki belen sarligalaa chhuaa padlaa maaet maanr kulen
Kuaan kuaan kari kaandi chatilaa puraa gahr duaren.
Bhuligalaa bhuaasen sabu dukh darad shuni chhuaar kaandi
Lagaalaa chhuaake chhati na jaaki usat maaden kaandi.
Maa hebaartaa kede sukh chhuaa ke dekhi jaanlaa
Taar aankhir taraa ke dekhi kari mulki hansi nelaa.
Seems good. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks
thank you...sure i will love to read the poem Love and Lust.....
Maa hebaartaa kede sukh chhuaa ke dekhi jaanlaa Taar aankhir taraa ke dekhi kari mulki hansi nelaa. Beautiful delivery poem..Thanks poetess for describing a delivering mother's pain so vivid. 10 for its sharing.
thanks anita for the appreciation....i tried to recall all the events........
Gad-gadi gad-dgadi kaanduchhe bhuaasen tanti jaauchhe sukhi Daakuchhe bhagbaan maa hebaar taa ete dukh, neijaa tor pakhke. Laaij saram chhaadi naglaa butlaa se kirlauchhe kete Aankhir laha buhi naed helaana pherbi darad jete tete. Kauchhe daktar kati nia pet baahaar karidiaa chhuaa Sahi naain paaruchhen darad aau muin kentaa hemi maa. Etki belen sarligalaa chhuaa padlaa maaet maanr kulen Kuaan kuaan kari kaandi chatilaa puraa gahr duaren. Bhuligalaa bhuaasen sabu dukh darad shuni chhuaar kaandi Lagaalaa chhuaake chhati na jaaki usat maaden kaandi. Yes birth of a child makes a mother forget all pain and agonies. Thanks for the lovely poem on a mother delivering a baby.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
one of the great Koshli poet... Keep it on...
thank you..with your blessing hope to contribute a lot to Kosli literature......