Pitchfork Freudian Dream Poem by DAVID GERARDINO

Pitchfork Freudian Dream

Rating: 5.0


the past is present in this
pitchfork freudian dream, you
learn to skedaddle and giggle,
as this bipoler rain hits your
hands then feet.
still you cry, i cant escape me,
you hear me, i cant escape me.
the past is present in this small
room, he paints all the walls white,
she paints them gray and brown,
and they cry, i cant escape me,
you hear me, i cant escape me,
then this dream ends, and this
bipoler storm turns into nothing
more, , then a small wave.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Patricia Gale 06 January 2007

Fantastic title, fine work indeed

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R R 06 January 2007

Hi David, Excellent poem and very creative and unique. Take care

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 06 January 2007

Awesome language, as only can be expected by these pennings of surrealism... David, `you continue to impress, my friend. Frank

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