Play Poem by Rebecca Navarre

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Rating: 5.0


I wonder what they have to say. How
do you do, and how's your day? As they
dart around, seeming to laugh and play.
One bunny, one squirrel. Two different
colors. Two different worlds. Around and
around they swirl. Two hearts that twirl.

Wednesday, May 29, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: fun
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sylvia Frances Chan 02 June 2019

Addition: The two seem also playful. In playing and laughing they can get along. You have created a true adventurous poem to ponder upon, dear Becca, so loveliest! A 10+++++++++++++++++++++++ The title says it all: PLAY. I have enjoyed again a very lot. Thank you for sharing, Becca! God's greatest Blessings fall upon you and your beloved family.

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Rebecca Navarre 07 July 2019

Dear Sylvia, Thank you! .. For bringing so many smiles! .. You inspire so many in the beautiful ways your poetry touches hearts and shines on the Lord! .. Ever so reflectively! .. Thank you! .. God bless! ..

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Sylvia Frances Chan 02 June 2019

Imagining the bunny and the squirrel., WOW! Such a true adventurous poem, Becca! Only you can write a poem like this, full of bliss, Two different worlds. The bunny and the squirrel......Around and around they swirl. Two hearts that twirl..............but two hearts filled with love and in the land of love, there is always communication, the bunny and the squirrel have hearts of love, Love can always communicate. No? The two seem peaceful, Becca!

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Rebecca Navarre 07 July 2019

Goodness Thank you! .. Dear Sylvia, For taking the time to visit and read! .. I love watching nature at play and drifting off into some kinda story or thoughts! .. And you reply with such beautiful thoughts, that brings smiles to heart! .. Thank you again! .. For being ever so kind! ..

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Tigger Swoon 29 May 2019

Wonderfully exciting poetry.

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Rebecca Navarre 31 May 2019

Thank you! .. Tigger, For your kind reply! .. I look forward to visiting your poetry page! .. God bless! ..

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