Please Comment! Poem by achal agrawal

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when someone picks a pen,
in poemhunter - the poet's den,
and writes a poetry then,
amount women and men,

people who dont understand,
comment 'you have a great hand',
'you are the next ayn rand',
'the best poem on land'

everyone gives a ten,
when the poem is not worth a yen,
it cud have been written by chinese chen,
there is nothing deep like zen.

but when someone writes somehing easy,
people seem too busy,
cognizance is treated uneasy,
you get comments like ' this must have been breezy'!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kee Thampi 18 September 2006

everyone gives a ten, when the poem is not worth a yen, it cud have been written by chinese chen, there is nothing deep like zen. but when someone writes it is really true you write not a, (but you Gulp it openly..)

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Goldy Locks 11 September 2006

creative. this must've been breezy.

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