'Rhyme Crime' Grime Poem by achal agrawal

'Rhyme Crime' Grime



jobless are we,
cant you see,
time is sold free,
from sky to sea,
so dont spree,
one man's pee,
wont spoil the sea.

why dont you quit,
you have no wit,
go and sit,
make ur brain lit,
it doesnt fit,
bury yourself in a pit,

now thats how u rhyme...got it! ! !

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Trade Martin 11 September 2006

Achal, I just happened to read your tutorial poem. Thanks for the innovative rhyming pointers, we all appreciate it....! ! ! Best, T.M..

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Kee Thampi 11 September 2006

why dont you quit, you have no wit, go and sit, make ur brain lit, it doesnt fit, bury yourself in a pit, missed honesty in writings makes this a nice poem

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Preeti - is here! 10 September 2006

Achal, you've showed us the rhymes in this cute lil' poem. why don't you put a? instead of! after got it..just a suggestion. Preets

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Catastrophe King 09 September 2006

Thats what wud be known as stinking rhyme....

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