Katie Huntress

Rookie (march 6,1990)

Please, God, Please - Poem by Katie Huntress

Negativity drains my mind
Can’t it just go away!
My mind is like a broken record
Saying the same damn thing over and over again
Just wanting it to stop
Wanting it to get better
Stop putting myself down
My brain is only so big
I can only handle so much
Please, God, Please
Take me away from this pain
It hurts me so
Please, God, Please
Take me away from all this trouble
Not knowing what step to take
Just gliding along my path
Taking it day by day
Sun in my eyes, blinding me
Taking me off track
Going the wrong way
In a dark forest I go
Not knowing which way to go
Then there is a light I see
Taking me back to the winding road which I was born on
Taking me back were I am suppose to be
I know life is difficult
I know life sucks
But when you get off track
You have to find the light
That brings you back to life


Comments about Please, God, Please by Katie Huntress

  • (4/14/2006 12:47:00 PM)


    Awesome and inspiring. Truly, I thank you for the blessing of your words and the style you craft them with. Thank you for the honesty and the refreshing neogothic feel. We transition the pain away with a little help. Keep writing. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, April 14, 2006



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