Monday, May 12, 2008

Please Proceed To The Under Ground Bunker Directly Over Your Head... Comments

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You dropped the F bomb on him.
The money is gone and the rigor mortis
of poverty sets in….your life was his.
He has always been your provider; always
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Ted Sheridan
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Ivan Donn Carswell 19 May 2008

I kind of agree with Gregory - you are indeed homing in on a style which is singular. The irony here is true temper steel! . Rgds, Ivan

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Ouch. This suggests that love is a choice though, based on a reaction to assessment of circumstances... i do hope not....? t x

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Gregory Collins 12 May 2008

sheridan my friend, you are getting better and better with every write, and not that i did not think your writing was really good back in june or july, but truly, i see amazing improvements, if only you had the trumpet flowers i boil, then they would dig up keats and corso to bury you, to the bottom of nothingnes my friend

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'Please proceed to the under ground bunker directly over your head...' Lol Has anybody dropped a bomb? It can't be that bad... This is all about being honest and telling someone what hurts you most... Nobody's perfect and that's why broken things can be fixed...if both sides want to compromise...

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