all poems should be short and brief,
short in length, brief in meaning.
pithy, if they are meant to be,
a single gust should overpower you.
stun ifthey must with a message,
words must be powder dry and sharp as nail.
cloy, if they must with potions of love,
make your words soak with oodles of experience.
all the same, make them short and brief
for,
a four year old baby's stutter tells you more
about love and life, than an adult's ever would.
I agree as it does not take many words to get a message through. my kind of poetry. all poems should be short and brief, short in length, brief in meaning. charles garcia
i agree with you.but poems can be long if they can keep u reading at one breath up to the last and make u feel it in the pulse. nice poem
try haiku. udit. first kiss my hair dances to the gentle wind
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
this is clear cut direction for poets how to write good poetry..i like this