Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 689,276 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Poet And Pen - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

I appreciated and liked sword
Just held by lord
To kill the evil or monster
I used to wonder as soldier

It was young age
With mind so restless and engulfed with rage
The boiling pot was cooled down
With nuptial bond seriously shown

I forgot about any kind weapon
It was now introduction of pen
But what a soldier can write?
Where is literary skill and ideas to ignite?

No, no this is wrong
My heart beats faster for song
So I chose to be poet
With no expertise and soul so quiet

How far I have succeeded?
I have so far not probed
But readers comment with heart touch
The poetry certainly penetrates and reaches

Not all may be able to write
Or compose much to delight
It is heart and mind’s clash
That occurs in the form of flash

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Comments about Poet And Pen by Hasmukh Amathalal

  • Ramesh T A (8/14/2015 7:08:00 AM)

    Indeed a soldier cannot write, but if hearts ignites he can start writing like anything! (Report)Reply

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/14/2015 6:27:00 AM)

    Ramesh Thumati Alagarsamy Thank you very much for your nice appreciation, my dear friend!
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/14/2015 3:31:00 AM)

    Very fine sentiments, straight from your heart. Keep writing.


    GSP Rao, Hyderabad
    14 Aug,2015
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/14/2015 12:45:00 AM)

    Shirley Macclean Thanx to all those
    who liked my
    WALKING ALONE POETRY
    GRATEFUL
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/14/2015 12:45:00 AM)

    welcome Sanjyot Lupo likes this.
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  • Kumarmani Mahakul (8/14/2015 12:26:00 AM)

    Not all may be able to write
    Or compose much to delight
    It is heart and mind’s clash
    That occurs in the form of flash.......truely envisioned. A intensive poem I like most. TFS. ....10
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/13/2015 7:34:00 PM)

    It is heart and mind’s clash
    That occurs in the form of flash
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Poem Submitted: Thursday, August 13, 2015



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