Poetic Dialogue Poem by Deluke Muwanigwa

Poetic Dialogue

Rating: 5.0


Poetic dialogue (Terry Craddock)

'The night before i leave i will eat my last supper,
cooked by my wife who i know will suffer,
bid her adieu in melancholic silence
and prepare my divorce from her kindness'

TC

there is embodied within this exceptional emotive poem, a pulse beat slow well defined melancholic sadness, echoes in reality love tender lost appreciated spent, slow pulse beat first step stepping into love future potential unknown

DM

Yes, Terry, there is a very terrible heart trembling trepidation tellingly going to cause severe heartbreak severally to siblings wife and kids. A life in strife knife thrust fast in those abandoned without explanation or exclamation only exasperation. This scenario is seen in cities time and time again. I am glad the emotion of melancholy came out wholly as intended.

Wednesday, September 30, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: conversation
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Poets cryyyy!
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M Asim Nehal 30 September 2020

Excellent One my Friend DM A life in strife knife thrust fast in those abandoned without explanation or exclamation only exasperation.....you made me breathless till I finished reading these lines.

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Varsha M 30 September 2020

Poet's cryyyy today's theme.....

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