Poetic Mind Poem by Jude Lavu

Poetic Mind

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I would wish to have a mind
Like that of a poet
Being able to generate thoughts
And express them in writing.

Only then would i be able
To think critically
Capturing every lifes' moment
And put them in writing.

It would be an addiction
To my pen and paper
Armed with my thoughts
Searching through articles
For phrases and idioms
Just to hone my skills.

I would play with words
Employ some aspects of rhyme
And marvel at my artistry
Savoring all the compliments
Coming my way
Oh! How i wish.

It would be an addiction
Hard to fathom
Yet the only place
To seek solace
Whenever my mind is troubled.

Wednesday, July 15, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: poetic expression
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 23 July 2015

Piece of elegance, well articulated, nicely encapsulated and insightfully penned with conviction. You've captured the essence of poetry and the artistry of poets. A lovely poem indeed. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Jude Lavu 24 July 2015

Thanks a lot @ Chinedu. I am humbled by your comments.

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Fabrizio Frosini 16 July 2015

a very well penned write, Jude, and you've shown a poet mind, for sure.. only an advice, if I may: why all those commas..? ;) greetings from Italy

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Jude Lavu 16 July 2015

Thanks Fabrizio. It actually looks better without the commas. I really appreciate

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Abdalla Juma Shenga 16 July 2015

a very nice and creative piece i think you already have a poetic mind and you are using it well. thanks for sharing

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Jude Lavu 16 July 2015

U welcome Abdalla and thanks a lot too

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Kelly Kurt 16 July 2015

Apparently you do have the mind of a poet, Jude

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Jude Lavu 16 July 2015

Many thanks Kelly Kurt

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