Palas Kumar Ray

Rookie - 326 Points (20-05-1963 / India)

Poetry - Poem by Palas Kumar Ray

Adam looked at the lonely moon.
throughout the night he mused
he was all alone of his kind

unlike those lovely birds
unlike every other animals
who wandered in pairs around

till it was dark all around him.

He wished there be someone
also with him of his kind
as beautiful and tender for him.

Tears rolled down his cheeks.
Adam soulfully prayed for Eve.

© Palas Kumar Ray.All rights reserved.

Topic(s) of this poem: poetry

Comments about Poetry by Palas Kumar Ray

  • (11/8/2009 4:48:00 PM)

    A poetry moment of pure grace as only you
    could pen it. Beautiful, Palas. I am so glad
    I did not miss this one.

    Always your friend,

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  • (3/10/2009 5:13:00 PM)

    really pretty, i enjoyed this write, the spacing puts much emphasis on your strong lines, well done! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • (3/10/2009 8:33:00 AM)

    Very lovely lonely serenade. Nice (Report) Reply

  • (3/4/2009 1:52:00 AM)

    A beautiful piece of poetry. Very original and mind refreshing. thank you. (Report) Reply

  • (1/29/2009 11:08:00 AM)

    Lovely piece of reading... A joy to view your work 10

    Best of Health & Happiness

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  • (1/27/2009 10:18:00 PM)

    This is extremely beautiful and real... It's a pleasure to read your poetry too (Report) Reply

  • (1/27/2009 5:17:00 AM)

    wow Adam and Eve
    in the Garden of Eden
    dont tell me he only prayed--
    nice poem kept me thinking
    ++10 anjali
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  • premji premji (1/27/2009 12:34:00 AM)

    beautiful lines palas.....enjoyed.... (Report) Reply

  • (1/26/2009 6:12:00 PM)

    Palas, very well done. Very alive and real. By the way, you commented on one of my poems. Questioned my age. No, the age is incorrect. Don't like ages being displayed. Feel it detracts from essence of written thought. I'm rebelling. Thaks for your encouraging words. My best, Carol (Report) Reply

  • (1/26/2009 8:00:00 AM)

    lovely write Palas...enjoyed the read very much...thank you...Fi (Report) Reply

  • (1/25/2009 4:13:00 PM)

    absolutely lovely! !
    great work!
    10! : D
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  • (1/23/2009 12:09:00 AM)

    a creative spin-off on the process of evolving...nicely woven! (Report) Reply

  • (1/22/2009 7:33:00 AM)

    ..........Poetry is born out of pain and longing.....

    nice visualization, unique

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  • Maia Padua (1/22/2009 7:10:00 AM)

    a beautiful piece about creation
    the first man and woman... this shows love...
    eve was taken from the ribs of Adam....near his heart to be loved, not from his feet to be stepped upon...
    ...if Adam and Eve haven't committed sin, there there will be no US, no people around...
    great share....10++++
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  • Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr (1/22/2009 2:33:00 AM)

    A most inventive & intriguing spin on the Bible's kick-off story of God's Creation of Man & Woman...And a most apropos indeed, this is a fine display of what poetics be.

    F j R
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  • Indira Renganathan (1/22/2009 2:04:00 AM)

    Nice poetry on humanrace evolving...interesting 10 (Report) Reply

  • Sadiqullah Khan (1/22/2009 2:01:00 AM)

    A plain story. Had he not been created we would have been in peace. Good write Palas. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, January 22, 2009

Poem Edited: Saturday, June 7, 2014

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