Prose
Is this
How you are
I know nothing about.
How often I wonder why
Right after we started drifting away
How I finally managed to release the knot
You already knew before we left
Its the way this works
That makes the test
Relax my love
This is
Poetry
a good poem, I like the way you write it, free verse yet powerful :)
I think this is how sometime we all feel (except of course the philistines like Bri) Thanks for sharing BB : O)
i guess you are new to poemhunter. welcome aboard. now i find this poem easier on me than the tree poem, but it still is not right for me. i think it is cute how it is shaped like a triangle/woman's breast/mountain-turned-on-its-side. some punctuation might help the readers. thanks for sharing. :)
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
I like the form with which you wrote poem easy to read leaving is always painful