Ballerina With Fins

Poetry Ii. - Poem by Ballerina With Fins

taking a trip
on a lazy sunday afternoon
walking down the hot country lanes
through the dense forest
over the shimmering lake
under the dense sunlight
on a pompous red carpet
across the bustling city
beside the red roses
beneath the dreaming tree-shadows
through the strawberry fields

into the light.

Comments about Poetry Ii. by Ballerina With Fins

  • (5/12/2006 12:20:00 AM)

    I love playing with combinations of prepositional phrases. Good poem. Nice Read. (Report) Reply

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  • (5/8/2006 11:20:00 AM)

    nicely written! & i like your pen-name
    Best care,
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Poem Submitted: Monday, May 8, 2006

Poem Edited: Friday, May 19, 2006

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