Poets Evermore Poem by Thomas Kane

Poets Evermore

Rating: 5.0


Oh ye poet of poems, the father of inked lines
Penned words posted by many intrinsic minds
Nature's power and awe a poet need not endure
Waves crashing joy upon the rocky synapses
Addicted to loves expressive relapses
As time erodes the sand a poet and a man
Does this the sadness Settle way upon the fan
Winds blowing least rises a well knead dough
Churning the cog upon a fogged memory though
It sips off the top froth of meaning
Deeper suffice to the surface sheen gleaming
Simile sets the lip that of a lily dove
Still little is always more in the metaphor given my love
Take as much given more than ever to ignore
Greed not grinning just we look for evermore

Saturday, December 8, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: art,fellow,life,love,poem,poetic expression
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sylvia Frances Chan 08 December 2018

A 10 Full Vote for this Submitting. I truly have enjoyed.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 09 December 2018

You´re most welcome

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Thomas Kane 08 December 2018

Thank You So much

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Sylvia Frances Chan 08 December 2018

CONTINUED: You asked me to read your latest poem, but I am a straight-to-the-person-type, so here is my report. Remember that you have articulated it in excellent English, and that the story is good. Here are my honest compliments: an excellently worded poem, I most enjoyed, Thomas. G.B.U. Amen.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 08 December 2018

A beautiful poem and complete content, but the poem is too long. A good poem is limited to ten syllables or a bit more. If it gets too long, it loses its power. Ah, that's what it's all about. The completeness you want to show, you make up in the following verses. Do not be too long-winded.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 05 December 2018

This is an excellent poem about all poets hope it includes me LOL Use similis metaphors and compare your nose to a blooming rose add vinegar as a metaphor it's very rich just google do not use ellipses(.....) activate your synapses use your brains write free verse or quatrain let petrichor be known the sweet smell just after the dew drops of first rain smile again and again as does PLUNE and THOMAS KANE OF COLORADO MUCH MORE Enjoy this read if you please

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