Position Of Worship Poem by Malabika Ray Choudhury

Position Of Worship

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My father's garden afar cradled in my lavender memory, had serene chrysanthemums,
ravishing dahlias, along with smiling zinnias,
he dreamed of a life around those astounding flowers.
digging, and watering, and pruning the hedges,
a life full of tranquility and connected with ethereal nature,
like an enchanting picture painted by a visionary artist with shades of lush green …
painted with brown soil, golden sunshine, and pouring rain.
I see his powerful hands dusty with mud, holding the tools with strong grasp,
his upright face crimson toiling in the sun,
his whole body in a position of worship …
worshipping Nature.

this is a dream, which never happened for him.
he did not have a chance to live in his dreamland.

Tuesday, August 7, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: dream,life,parents,worship
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
My Father fell seriously ill before he retired, and never had the chance to follow his dream of spending time close to nature.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 08 August 2018

My Father's Garden had Chrysanthemums, /Dahlias, and Jinias, /He dreamed of a life around those flowers/Digging, and watering, and pruning the hedges/A life full of tranquility and connected with Nature....I like the way you have expressed your love to your beloved father who passionately engaged himself in worshiping nature! A great tribute to your papa! (10)

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Thank you so much. Your thoughtful and encouraging comments always inspire me. I miss my Dad. I am so glad to write a poem celebrating his passion for nature.

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Ratnamala 07 August 2018

A beautiful poem, a great tribute from a special daughter to her beloved father...10

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Thank you so much. I was blessed to spend a lot of time with my Father who was so passionate about Nature. Delighted to share with you.

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