If my life is like a river, not all pebbles are shiny;
If my life is like a flower, not all petals are smooth;
There are pebbles, there are petals,
Covered with dreams,
So soft, almost like an angel
Touching them,
Caring them.
Let them be where they are -
Unharmed,
Because dreams are not to be shattered!
A fine start with a nice poem, Malabika. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks
An elegant piece of poetry! Sweet expression! My favorite lines are opening two lines: If my life is like a river, not all pebbles are shiny/ If my life is like a flower, not all petals are smooth...Thanks for sharing! You may like to read my poem 'An Ode to My Conscience'..Thank you
If my life is like a flower, not all petals are smooth.....true.
A fascinating poem... so lucid poetic expression. I love this beautiful poem dear poetess.
Beautiful poem. Journey of river is not smooth still sweet dreams are a solace.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
An insightful piece of poetry, well articulated and nicely penned with conviction. Thanks for sharing Ray.
Thanks for your positive comments. Means a lot.