when for a hushed moment I close my eyes,
all I see is a dreamlike abode…
cradled among an enchanting landscape…
of roses, and dahlias, and chrysanthemums,
and a dainty lass with flowing dark hair in a yellow poncho,
frolicking around a young boy with star-struck eyes!
you missed your golden moment, beautiful girl with misty eyes!
you chose a turbulent life -
and left behind a true love.
you missed your precious moment, lovely girl!
and chose an uncertain path
embracing aching heart!
you didn't know what pure love is, Princess of the alluring hamlet!
you didn't know how treasured the celestial feeling is …until you lost your treasure,
you shouldn't have been so oblivious,
until you didn't find it!
cry, cry, beautiful girl - find the surreal garden
around the dreamlike abode…
with ethereal jasmine flowers
on the ground.
pick up a sublime flower with heavenly scent,
don't stop, pick up another…
until your ambrosial bouquet with flowing tear-drops would come together.
Thank you, Dear Poet, for reading my poem! Your comments are valuable in my journey!
Wow simple Wow a moving poem that capture beautiful little pictures abt longing, dream and reality
Thank you, Dear Poet! Appreciate your thoughtful comments! Delighted that you enjoyed the simple, little pictures of love from the past!
Excellent write. A wonderful and touching poem with a meaningful message. Beautifully crafted with superb imagery. A pure poetic joy!
You didn't know what love is, Golden girl! You didn't know how treasured that is, Until you lost it, You shouldn't have been so oblivious, Until you didn't find it! IF ONLY THEY HAD BRAINS LIKE GUYS HAVE HEADS TWO U KNEW
All little things are so cute and beautiful! You have taken a lovely concept and constructed this poem so elegantly! Loved reading it.................................10
Thank you so much for revisiting the poem and leaving such encouraging comments (and rating) ! Appreciate so much!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
What a lovely poem! I could see myself in your poem! Great thoughts indeed!