Thursday, March 1, 2012

Possible Prosody Comments

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Once a year each rachel, chilver
orphan's gathered in a satchel, silver
and nurtured far beyond a sliver,
Once a month is quite enough
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Smoky Hoss 04 March 2012

Excellent! Very entertaining; which is often just what the soul needs, you've hit the mark squarely. Very well done.

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Neela Nath Das 02 March 2012

You are a juggler of words.A superb poem.

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Danny Draper

Danny Draper

Kiama, New South Wales, Australia
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