Poultice And Prayer Poem by Gary Witt

Poultice And Prayer

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Shake the feathered rattle,
Paint my face with charcoal and ash,
Wave the bamboo wand
In front of my sleepy eyes
As I sweat and convulse
Beneath a leafy canopy,
Before a joyful congregation.

Let this moment grant profound relief,
Let me fool myself into thinking I can walk,
And that this light that tips me forward on my knees
Is ancient, wise, calm, and clear to my restive soul.

Mystery then shall dissolve into darkness,
Desire shall abate into a trance.
The music swells, the drums thunder,
And I am no longer writhing on this straw mat.

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Sue Ann Simar 26 August 2009

I'm guessing that the reactions to this poem would vary greatly. . Me? I felt everything pilgrim in me become puritan. . I'm much too private and contained for spiritual displays.

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There is something about this series of imperatives, and end 'release', that has me gripped. A grand penning G, as always. t x

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