Prayerful Resolution. - 2009 Poem by Fay Slimm

Prayerful Resolution. - 2009

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Give me a heart that is free.
Unfettered and untroubled mind.
Give me contentment, then help me
Resolve to leave any worries behind.
Please..........
Open my heart to the new.
Where fresh opportunity waits.
Teach me to be to myself true.
Thus unafraid, I will welcome my fate.
Thank you..........

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jon Ojala 07 January 2009

Fay, A beautiful image, welcoming our fate, keeping open to all that life brings us. Thanks! Jon

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Ron Flowers 07 January 2009

A beautiful prayer, simply put yet so profound. Have a wonderful day Ron

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C.R. Clark 07 January 2009

A wonderful poem, Fay. For what better could anyone ask. Well done. Best wishes Richard

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Robert Howard 05 January 2009

This is a work of admirable self examination and clear resolve. I can't think of any better guarantee for personal and professional success that to have: 'a heart that is free' and an 'unfettered and untroubled mind.'

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Michael Gale 05 January 2009

Who could ask for anything more? Great poem Fay! God bless all who listen to and read poetry-MJG.

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Dr.subhendu Kar 15 January 2009

Give me a heart that is free. Unfettered and untroubled mind. a wonderful prayer as soul aspires to have always to sway in its own way while trudging the path across one`s journey as the creativity booms by the freedom, heart and mind energised by the blessings day by day to reach the goal, .May god bless by ur prayer, most impeccable and passionate write! , heart smacks of success,10+++++, thanks for sharing

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I take this as my own as well.

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Mark Nwagwu 13 January 2009

This is a wonderful prayer - for a heart that is free, true to yourself. I mosat fervently join you in this prayey, Fay, for a happy 2009

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Juneil Sechico 11 January 2009

it's nice lovely gal! i like it! very sincere and heartfelt! everybody must red this....

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Alison Cassidy 09 January 2009

This is a welcome relief from the theistic prayers of many that make me feel rather inadequate and frankly, uncomfortable. It is spiritual without being clawing and filled with humility and thoughtful self-searching. Contentment is a great word - and a wonderful aspiration. A rich and rewarding poem. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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